awsome song by carman

A speacial request!!

this one post is a speacial request. since i havnt posted in a long time, i have decided to take that speacial request to heart. for this speacial request, i will write a story on the top of my head!!! are yall ready?

 this is my title: jumping the wrong fence(i think its creative)


"Annibell, get up! your paw's here to take you out to the feilds!!" my mother yelled at me while banging the vacume cleaner against my door. not the best way to wake up. "i be gettin up, ma. now shut up that obstreperous sound!!!" my brother was allready up and ready to go. he liked goin to the feilds with paw. i seriously hated it to the smelly core. i do have a wise reason for this, im a girl, ofcourse. my weary body slumped out of bed and lumbered over to my dresser. i looked in the mirror at my greyish eyes and sloppy looking hair. it seemed like all my clothes were cloned and all looked alike, smelled alike, and felt alike. i have allways wanted something new to wear. atleast a new detergent or something. i got dressed and headed out that moth eaten wood door.

 my brother khol, my paw, the old hound dog chuck, jack and chris(the two horses) and i headed down that dirt road toward the sunblazed feild. it was  atleast 100 degrees farenhite outside. after a couple of miles walking, the horses slowed down, the ol' hound dog dropped on the side of the road in the cool grass to rest, and paw, khol, and i sat on a white cow fence.i looked up at the sky, trying to see more, trying to see if i can see the galaxy. i cant believe the universe goes on and on and never ends. soon, we started again on our journey. only a mile more.

 finnaly, we reached that blasted field!! i could slightly see the sprouts of cabbage coming up from the soil of the earth. the corn was about as tall as paw now, hes six foot one. the corn was amazing me. like a show all by itself. yellows, greens, and reds filled the feild. such a gorgeous sight. the ripe tomatoes looked soooo juicy. nothing looked better. i imagined the corn buttered , on our table, with green peas, meat from the cow, and spiced tomatoes. the image never left my brain. my brother picked up a rake and started raking the land for any weeds. i picked up a watering can and started vigourusly watering the plants and picking corn. my paw was getting new soil ready on the other half of the feild, getting ready for the next crop season.  nothing better than working in the field on a hot, summer day. my ol' lazy hound lay by the horses, while the horses was swattin flies with their long brown tails.the harvest was put into baskets mama beutifully weaved and it was pleaced on a horse. much sucess i say!! we headed home, proud of our progress. my brother and i raced home, running in the door yellin,'' we got a whole, lotta food fer us, ,ma!! are u proud?" mama looked at us with her weary eyes, i could tell she didnt get a lot of sleep last night and while we were gone, she was working. our cheery selves quickly vanished, as if we knew what was wrong. i spotted an evict paper that said we either pay the land payment. we havent had a lot of money ever since paw lost his job as a blacksmith. we just didnt have the money to pay the property tax. if we didnt pay it soon, it said we would lose our farming land. all of our new crops were there, we couldnt just leave them there to wither and die! we did to much to that land! where would we grow crops? i was so sad. my paw would be even more sad cause thats his living. thats where we get all our food!! suddeny, khol moaned," noo!! mama, i dont wanna starve! i wanna keep the land! can we do something to pay it off?" suddenly, without thinking, i blurted," me and khol can get jobs in town. we will work till we get enough money." i sounded so serious i suprised myself! "but annibelle, yall two are extremely too young ! at that last word, a fine lookin man walked into the door without knockin, and said,''dont you worry ma'am, i'll take care a' errethang." he turned at me and said,' and yall chillens dont worry about gettin a job.you all's land will be taken care of in no time." his voice sounded so reassuring. im  sure everything was going to be allright. even maw looked a little relieved, even though we had no idea who that young feller' was. his sharp blue eyes looked like they were saying, dont worry, everthing's gonna be fine.


soooo........how was that random story? comment, i wanna know wat u think!!

Read this letter to my freind

Dear sally,

Today I am visiting my dear aunt cally.
But yesterday she married mally
And she was very dally,
About her good ol' mallly
In the kitchen they sing and sing
It sounds like a wonderful thing
But then they spit in the food,
Wich I thought it was quite rude
And the dog runs aroound and is crued.
They have no pepper and salt,
It is not really their fualt,
they are both adults.
No, they do not know how to make choclate malts.
I do not want to go over there,
Even if I don't have to clean my underwear.
Love your dear freind ,
Shanaenae. I hope this does not affend

The Journey

"ring! ring!" the trains alarm was screeching that horrible noise. i looked down out the window to see the choppy waters along with my own images popping in my head. i imaged the train in the dark eerie depts of the sea. of course, i knew this alarm just meant to stay in your seat. no major issue. this journey was because of freedom. freedom from the hands of the Nazi soldiers in Germany. we were traveling 1000 miles to the boat to America . a strange place. our destination was new york. my family of 4 was very, well, scarce of money, just like everyone else. my sister, Lou, was an excellent violin player, also a sneaky one. she snuck some cash in the unvisible part of the case. you see, we had to give all our money to the men who boarded us.yep, every ounce. government orders.we also had to give them something else for our soon to be arriving new member of the family, joey.our mom was 9 1\2 months pregnant. i wonder when he was coming. we didn't have the money to go to the doctor to find out his due date. above the screeching alarms, i heard a familiar scream. my mothers!!! in a flash, i was by her side. she was giving birth to my new brother! everyone panicked . on top of that,i heard lightning strike somewhere near and the train bridge in front of us collapsed . we were still at full speed. no one was aware of the Bridge situation but i.

The follower to school (Dramatic)

"the walk."
my life...depended on this walk, to be whipped or not to be whipped. you see, my keeper, who controls me, or also my mother, demanded me to walk to school . Not to the bowling ally, not to the book store, but to school. this journey would take about a century, also noting it would be a trecherouse and dangerous walk. If I fail my mission, I will get lashed with a leather spiked belt that would be heated in a fiery furnace . The tricky thing is to get to school on time. I have to arrive in my deep dungeon like classroom controlled by an awful, deformed,appalling, evil teacher. My destination time should be 8am sharp. morning is here allready. I get drug out of bed by my keeper. my body....is....aching with pain......it's unbarable.......my throaght aches, I stood up and...my legs!....they made a stabbing feeling shoot up to my brain, wich triggered my pain. I took a step, I ,I couldn't continue! Before I realized it, i collapsed . In my head,Iwas thinking"how in this universe was I going to walk to school? I limped over to my clothes,( at least i could do that), wich was laid on a bucket in my moused sized room with a dirt floor.I smoothed my long, dirty blond hair and put it in a pony tail neatly. I accomplished everything else in a matter of 5 minutes.Then I was off. The gray and gloomy sky was cloaked by the massive weaping willows and oak trees that climbed to the clouds. My freind was tighty fitted into my schoolbag. Her name was stuffy because she was stuffed with , um, stuff. As i was limping in the crispy leaves on a muddy path, I heard something strange! It sounded like someone was following me ! As i was walking, i heard the leaves crunching. I started running , ignoring the harsh pain in my leg. The follower has started running to! With my heart nearly breaking skin in my chest from pounding, i started moaning. Not just from the fact of my leg, but I did not know who this follower was and wanted with me.I Barely saw anything with my teary eyes . The follower was still following me.Still at the same rate as me. Through all the tears and pain, I saw the old, rundown, school house with a promising look of secureness.When I got off the crunchy leaf path, I didn't hear the follower. Right when i arrived in the classroom , the peircing bell filled my ears. Yes! I....have accomplished my journey! Alas, the teacher stepped in the class with a look on her face that told everything. The look that means I'm in trouble. Why do I have to be allways right? With her curled, red, fingernail, she told me to step in to the dark, cold hallway. She pulled some papers out of her binder. a detention from the principal, i am in biggg trouble